Istiqomah Khairunnisah(12320037)
Khoridatul Istigfaroh(12320153)
Suicide
has gained attention as a national problem after the deaths of several
well-known people in Korea. According to Organization for Economic Corporation
Development (OECD), more than 1,500 Koreans committed suicide in 2010, which is
a 50 cases increase from 2006. Therefore, the rate of suicide in Korea is the
highest in the world. There are several general causes behind this suicide
cases, they are physical appearance, psychological despair, and economic
difficulties.
Physical
appearance is one of some reasons why famous people in Korea committing suicide.
Hard competition between entertainers forces them to always show their perfect
appearance in front of their fans, in order to survive in entertainment
world.Actually not all of them have good physical appearance and the best
choice to make them look better is doing plastic surgery which is unfortunately
will endanger them. In the other hand, plastic surgery also make them addicted,
and when they are not satisfied with the result, it will make them depression
and the last action is committing suicide. Most of them often would rather die
than look bad.
Other
reason of committing suicide is psychological despair. Most of Korean
entertainers have very high expectation in their career. However, it is not
supported by their qualified abilities; they only give priority to their good
physical appearance and deny the qualified skill they should performed. As a result, there are many of people especially
netizens (people who use internet) who give them rude critics and meanest
things on celebrity news articles about their fake performance. These things
absolutely make them suffer psychologically. Final way to solve that problem is
taking their own lives (suicide).
An
economic difficulty is also contributed in this case. Korea’s economy is
currently at the worst possible rate but competition for getting a job is the
highest rate and only the best can survive. In the other hand, creditor and loan
shark are also having role in this case and many of celebrities in Korea who
have problem with them. Ahn Jae Hwan is one of Korean celebrities who have a
high dept. He borrowed a huge amount of money from illegal creditor for a movie
that he was making. Unfortunately, he could not pay the debt and could not get
out of it. Ahn was found dead in his car on September 8, 2008. Police confirmed
that he was committing suicide by consuming poisons.
Nowadays,
it seems that committing suicide is becoming “trend” among the Korean artists.
They think that take their own life is the best and the final way to solve
their problem. They never think that life is too worthy to be waste. Although
there are many of obstacles impeding our way, we should face it. Ending the
life early is not good choice to choose, because there is no problem without
its solution. As a quote from D. H Lawrence, “Life is beautiful, as long as it
consumes you. When it is rushing through you, destroying you, life is gorgeous,
glorious. It’s when you burn a slow fire and save fuel that life’s not worth
having”.






# the title is pretty good. it can make us curious to continue reading the essay
ReplyDelete# there are some grammatical errors :
- "Actually not all of them have good physical appearance" should be "actually, not all of them have a good physical appearance"
- "it will make them depression" should be "it will make them depressed"