Zakiyatul Mufidah
10320108
Brainstorming
Topic: First year study in campus
Introductory Paragraph
Title: the unforgettable moments in the
boarding school
Characters à
Major: Zakeeyah
Minor: Zakeeyah’s roommate
–Fatheemah, syiha, Azzura, Bieng, vivi, Syafeaa, Sanea.
Supervisor, advisor and uncle.
Setting of Place: boarding school, bedroom,
class, mosque, in front of sport center, in front of lecture building, sport
center, house and college.
Setting of Time: in the morning, in the
evening, fasting month, new academic year.
Setting of condition: strange, happy,
tired, boring, sad.
Thesis Statement (moral value + topic):
My first year study in the campus, I learn
to be autonomous person.
Body Paragraphs:
·
Plot one;
the beginning of the story.
The
students would start their activities in the boarding school.
·
Plot two;
climax/ conflict.
I
couldn’t come back to my hometown, because my father didn’t have enough money
to buy a ticket for me.
·
Plot
three; resolution.
I
spent my holiday in Fatheemah’s house for several days, and
then I went to my uncle’s house to celebrate Idul Fitri.
Concluding Paragraph:
·
Restatement
of thesis statement:
To
be autonomous person is better for our life, because we cannot ask someone else
to help us every time.
·
Moral
value:
Learn
to be autonomous person.
The unforgettable moments in the boarding school
New
academic year was started. I was accepted in state Islamic university Maulana
Malik Ibrahim Malang. In this university, I had to stay in the boarding school
for two semesters later. The first time I arrived in the boarding school, I
went to meet supervisor and advisor of boarding school. Supervisor and advisor
told me about the rule of boarding school. He not only tells about the rule but
also the activities of boarding school. After meeting with the supervisor and
advisor, I am going to check my bedroom. I put my bags and cleaned the room. I
was alone in the bedroom, so I tried to imagine about many things that will
happen after day.
I
was in the boarding school two days ago, but the other members were not coming
yet. I have been alone during a day. Suddenly the door was opened, and there
were three people coming. After a few minutes, two people came again. One of
them came and spoke to me. After an hour, I was known the name of my roommate.
We went to buy food together in the evening. When we arrived in the bedroom,
there were three people in the bedroom. We talked to them and joked while
eating. Adzan isya’ was heard. We prayed together in the bedroom. At the 18.20,
there was an announcement that the student of boarding school would be gathered
in the corridor of boarding school. We went to the corridor and be attention
with the explanations of supervisor about many things. The supervisor said that
the activities would start tomorrow morning. “The students of boarding school
should wake up in the early morning. Going to the mosque in every prayer, and
forbidden to come late. We would have shobahullugoh and taklim every morning,
accept weekdays”, supevisorsaid loudly. After the announcement, we went to bed
together. I remember all of moments during a day. Now, I have seven friends,
Fatheemah, Syiha, Azzura, Vivi, Bieng, Syafeaa, and Sanea. I hoped they would
be my best friends in this boarding school.
Fatheemah
woke me up in the early morning,
“Za, wake up, wake up!”Zakeeyah said softly
“What was happen sister? I have been
sleepy…” I said
“We have to go to the mosque, do you
remember it?” Fatheemah said, very fast.
Sanea and Vivi came to help Fatheemah.
“Za, wake up, wake up” Sanea tried to wake
me up.
“Come on Za, we have to go” Vivi said
loudly.
“Okay okay, I know, I know”, I said lazily.
Syiha, Syafeaa and Bieng didn’t go to
mosque, because they were getting their period. We went together to the mosque.
After praying subuh, we read holy Qur’an together.
‘Za I am sleepy”, Vivi said weakly.
“How if we are come back to the bedroom
now? I said in her ears.
“But we cannot do that, it is forbidden for
us” Vivi tried to explain me.
“Never mind girl, we are not alone. There
are many people coming back to the bedroom”, I said very clear.
“okey, let’s go!” Vivi said happily.
We were coming back to the bedroom and
sleeping together.
“Za, Vivi, wake up. It’s time for
sobahullugoh and taklim” Syiha said loudly.
“What time is it now?” I said ..
“06.00 a clock, come on, we will came
late”. Syiha said
“Okay, let’s go!” I said
The
activities of boarding school are too difficult for me. But my friend always
remembered me about my parents in the house. There are many activities; usually
I had taklim in the corridor, in the class, and in the mosque. Sobahullugoh not
only did in one place, but also in the several places. We moved every day,
sometimes in the sport center, in front of lecture building, etc. My friends
and I, did it during semester until the holiday was coming. I was very sad,
because I cannot came back to my home town.
“Why do you look so sad Za?” Fatheemah
asked me warmly.
“I cannot come back to my home town” I said
sadly.
“You can stay in my house and you can spend
your holiday in my house” Fatheemah said
“But it will disturb you and your family” I
said
“No, it will be fine” Fatheemah said
“Thanks’ Fatheemah” I said
Fatheemah’s family picked her and me up.
When we arrived, Fatheemah’s mother waited for us in front of the house.
I
was in Fatheemah’s house three days ago. When I woke up in the morning, my
phone was twinkling on the table. I got a call from my uncle. My uncle called
and asked me to spend my holiday in his house. I was permitted by Fatheemah’s
family, because my uncle will pick me up that day.
To be autonomous person is better for our
life, because we cannot ask someone else to help us every time. I was happy
because I choose to study in the state Islamic university Maulana Malik
Ibarahim Malang. I hope it will help me to be success person in the future.
