Wednesday, June 4, 2014

Korean Wave

Ahmad Faiz 
Ahmad Izzudin Naufal

The Causes of Korean Wave

                Korean wave is a trend which is attributed to Korean’s culture such as wearing Korean’s style and singing or imitating Korean music. It has spread rapidly especially in our country. In this era, the virus  of Korean wave increases rapidly in certain Asian countries, such as China, Hong Kong, Taiwan, Singapore, Japan, and the Philippines. We can see that there are many young people participate at this trend.  Most of Indonesian young people participate at it. It means that almost of Indonesian young people prefer Korean’s style than other styles. We can find Korean fans everywhere. There are some causes make us fall into the Korean wave.
            The good-looking actor/actress can be its main cause of Korean wave . As we know that all of Korean actors/actress have a good-looking performance. They used to wear a glamourous clothes and a cool hair style . All of them are handsome(actors) and beautiful(actress) but the Korean actors used to look girlish. However, almost of them do plastic surgery because they think it is the only way to be a popular person. We can see now that there are many Indonesian young people wear clothes which is like as Korean’s style and they also like to imitate Korean’s hair style. For the one loving it fanatically will do plastic surgery to look as same as Korean actors.    
            Korean music is also the cause of Korean wave. Girl band and boy band are the group band of Korea which are popular in the world. The music is always a kind of music beat.  The most popular trait of Korean music is singing with dancing. Its genre is well-known as K-pop. We can find many girl/boy bands which choose this genre in Indonesia. It is becoming the most popular genre in Indonesia. It even can  displace other genres.
            Korean movie also needs to be considered as the cause of Korean wave. It consists of a serial drama and a cinema. Most of Korean movies are drama movie. It is sometimes about love and friendship. The story line is truly good and It can influence the audiences to engage with story line. It always have some touching scenes. Although it is an action movie, it also have it which can cause our tears flow. It even can make us addicted on it.  
            Those are the causes of Korean wave. We can easily find it from many sources such as from television, internet, and other social medias. Those all can make us addicted to consume it more and more. Therefore, we will fall into the Korean wave.


1 comment:

  1. it it a good essay. you write it in ordered manner. each idea of each paragraph is also clearly stated. therefore I have some corrections and suggestions for your essay.

    1st paragraph
    - 2nd sentence >> "It has spread rapidly especially in our country." in my opinion, you better omit this sentence. instead of write it here you can put it in the 3rd paragraph (...... Asian countries, such as China, Hong Kong, Taiwan, Singapore, Japan, and Indonesia.)
    -3rd sentence >> "In this era, the virus of Korean wave .." instead of using "virus", I suggest you to use the word "phenomenon" >> In this era, Korean wave phenomenon....
    -4th sentence >> you can change young people to youngsters (make it simple^^). and why did you choose to use word "participate"? how about using "follow". the sentence will be like this "We can see that there are many youngsters are following this trend."
    if you insist to use word "participate", the collocation for word "participate" isn't "at" but "in" (participate in).
    -you better omit the 6th sentence, in my opinion this sentence isn't important ^^v
    -last sentence >> you use word "us", change it to "them". suppose that you want to refer it to the youngsters, so it is better to use "them".

    -I found several typos on your writing. be careful with the spelling (glamourous > glamorous) and also verb agreement (it have > it has)
    -there are no adequate linking words, too -either in the beginning of paragraph or between sentences-.
    -in the concluding paragraph you didn't restate the TS. it is like you write it in hurry and you just want to finish your writing quickly. However, you use prediction of action as the implication, in my opinion that's good idea. that saves your concluding paragraph.

    well done guys. keep writing because there's no ending for writing ^^
    Nur Fatikh Rifana

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